My own poem "unforgetable memory"

by **net-trap** Sat Dec 20, 2008 2:56 am

i've just written it few minutes ago,so i think to share with you guys. .

Dead leaves are falling on ground,
sweet gentle breeze blows back around.

its not what i thought would be,
something strange feelings in me.

I gaze a while,again,again i see
heart found beating who is she!!

She passes long path glittering oh!
I think magic,walk alone her path through

questioned mind,do i love her?
Black eyes,long hairs chanted forever!!

I wanna say,something,something;
i'm lost,afraid of nothing.

She turns on me look for even one last,
i lost her,can't believe the past.

Often my tears fall,but mind never cries,
cause heart says me,true love never dies...................
I love you

by **sweetu** Sat Dec 20, 2008 7:05 am

Net its Awesome wow you have talent...
you should write more poems

by **natalie-luv** Sat Dec 20, 2008 12:37 pm

aawww so sweet netu ....
its showing that you are romantic guy .... guitar

keep rocking ....

by iceman Sat Dec 20, 2008 4:02 pm

Bro thankz for sharing wit uz ur poem itz rokin cheers

by sharp_shutar Sun Dec 21, 2008 12:21 am

nice work netu...
" Often my tears fall,but mind never cries,
cause heart says me,true love never dies...................""

i agree " true love never dies"